Walk With Me

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And here's chapter 14!

Chapter 14 - A Different Kind of Sick

http://www.fanfictio...17/Walk-with-Me


Got a little lost on this one will have to read again.
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Roll outta my coffin Drink poison in my chalice Pride begins to fade And y'all feel my malice

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The only thing that I didn't like was the end part of the chapter. I really didn't understand the jump you made there.
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The only thing that I didn't like was the end part of the chapter. I really didn't understand the jump you made there.


Oops, sorry.
The epilogue happened the night before T-Dog and Glenn approached Daryl regarding kissing Emyli--basically, the epilogue happened BEFORE the main plot of the chapter. Sorry if this confused you. I actually wanted the reader to realized only at the end of the chapter what it had meant for Emyli for Daryl to just "forget about everything."

If you're still confused, you can try reading the chapter again, but this time, epilogue first and then the part where Daryl was approached by T-Dog and Glenn, and then Daryl and Emyli's run to the Dairy.

Thanks again for reading :)
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Got a little lost on this one will have to read again.


I'm so sorry about that.
If you're confused, you can try reading the chapter with the "epilogue" first--because that happened before the main plot of the chapter.

Sorry again :)
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I figured it out eventually, but at first I was just like"wait a minute what??". At least I know what you were attempting to convey with it now.
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